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No-one darest cross this man. No-one darest fight this man. He is king. The battlefield is his.
Submitted By Sprawl on 12/09/17
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MANY DAYS LATER...
 
As the russet dust swirled across the rugged wastes, a lone man, perched on a peak, looked down on the violently beautiful landscape below. The melted, corroded remains of old hovercrafts lay scattered across the plain. And as he watched he relived the battle. The whirr of industrial engines, the roar of battle, the fire of doomed men's spirits. He leant forward on his rifle, and probed the air before him with his tired hand. A little spark at his fingertips reminded him that he was protected by a forcefield. He threw a quick glance at his weapon - an oceanic blue core curled around a silver bolt; this was the Dolvium Core, a powerful material discovered on the moon which allowed his rifle to fire over great distances.
 
He knelt, and raised his rifle. He slowly closed one eye, and his open eye he pressed to the scope. His vision now reached miles and miles away, and he examined the barren landscape for a sign. Was there ever going to be a sign? Where was Flynn?
 
He swivelled around to see the great carcass of the American Ship, still smouldering. No signs of life. Not yet.
 
Then, quick as a flash, something darted across the metallic ruins. Kruncher homed in.
"Ah ha," he grunted, satisfied. He modified the zoom on the scope and looked closer. "No..." he exlaimed, taking his eye away from the scope, and blinking in disbelief. He looked again. There was no mistaking the figure crouching behind a wrecked partition wall.
 
Kruncher pulled the bolt deftly without a glance, and pressed his finger gently to the trigger, ready to pull. He grinned.
"Hello, Aubrey."

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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM VIII: KRUNCHER
1 week - 32,767v
Posted 2012/09/17 - 22:43 GMT
O.O
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM VIII: KRUNCHER
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Posted 2012/09/17 - 22:47 GMT
Hey your back! :D
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM VIII: KRUNCHER
1 week - 32,767v
Posted 2012/09/17 - 22:50 GMT
Hello...

I'm guessing this is more symbolic than all...it rings true of our past months as a community...

Hello AUBREY! ;)
 
In other news.. About the creepiest "IM BAKK!!!" post I have ever seen..
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM VIII: KRUNCHER
1 week - 32,767v
Posted 2012/09/17 - 23:09 GMT
SPRAWL YOUR BACK YA IM USING INCORRECT GRAMMER.
 
Hey dude, that was about the best "I iz bakc" post I've ever seen.
 
I really can't wait to read the next one...
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM VIII: KRUNCHER
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Posted 2012/09/17 - 23:25 GMT
WB sprawl!
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM VIII: KRUNCHER
1 week - 32,767v
Posted 2012/09/18 - 1:04 GMT
Shouldn't this be posted in:
 
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM VIII: KRUNCHER
1 week - 32,767v
Posted 2012/09/18 - 3:12 GMT
No, because no-one goes there. We thought he'd left forever, plus since this fanfiction is good, and since fanfictions are being posted on Marsxplr.com/index, yes, it belongs here.
 
Also, shouldn't this be THOSE THAT ROAM IX?
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM VIII: KRUNCHER
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Posted 2012/09/18 - 3:22 GMT
I guess, although I think there should be a copy as an easy access Library of these.
 
So I would like this to be copied to that site, so when you go on the site, you see all the stories.
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM VIII: KRUNCHER
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Posted 2012/09/18 - 1:10 GMT
Creepy and suspenseful..... I like it :D
 
Even with just those first few paragraphs, the plot is beginning to develop..... I like it a lot

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