it's a start...... not being mean here, but try and redo it much better... just so know i redid the Sky Monster around 4 times to get the look you see in mars today.... well more like 4 total remakes and lots of adding deleting of parts, and even now i am redoing to make it look more futuristic  

i know where i could put it in my world. 4 suggestions. make the wings thinner, give it a curved underbelly. and make the rear end pointed. also could you make the inside.