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Oh, so you thought we were done, eh?
Submitted By Sprawl on 11/01/15
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I awoke in my ship. There was no power, it was crumpled, and I was on my back, blood flowing from my wounds. It was very dark, and very hot.
 
But I had survived the blast.
 
I looked outside, and saw nothing. Just blackness. Darkness. I looked into the sky, and saw a small twinkle. Falconer had completed the evacuation. I was dizzy, and smoke crept up my nostrils. I couldn't see very well in the darkness, and I began to lose my balance. Suddenly lights flared from in front of my ship, and another forcefield extended to my own. It was a tank - but a heavily modified form of our own. There was more armour, it was a lot larger, and had fewer windows - but there were laser periscopes. A door opened, and a man beckoned for me to come towards him. I staggered onto the ground between the two crafts as my hovercraft collapsed into a pile of twisted metal behind me. I stumbled onto the side of the ship and the man pulled me in. I heard a voice.
"We have a Brit here! This is good! I love British people!" the accent was British. I looked up and saw a man with a large Dolvium rifle. He was grinning. I frowned, then passed out.
 
* * * *
 
I regained consciousness a while later, and eventually I regained my full sight and hearing. The pocket man came towards me again. He pulled me up and held out his hand.
"Pete Madissen," he said. "Engineer. But they call me Pocket Mad - for a reason..." Another man, slightly taller, equipped with a lot of rifles, a launcher, and a pistol in his hand approached. He was gruff, and firm.
"You can call me Kruncher." I nodded. There was going to be no messing with this one. I looked around. There were two others who also introduced themselves to me. The keeper of the logbook, historian, and co-pilot, Picard, was a thoughtful, wise man. But the man who fascinated me the most was Flynn. Flynn Clubbaire, known as Flyclub by the crew, was the Captain, and the main pilot. He had, in fact, designed this entire tank. He had navigated the entire circumference of Mars, and knew his way through the harsh deserts.
 
He was a remarkable man, good-spirited, kind-hearted, always positive, and the entire crew looked up to him. He described his band of brothers as just that - a brotherhood. They had been roaming Mars for a week before our Expedition. They knew not of the Great Martian War, as they had been over 100 miles away. They knew I was a soldier, and they were cautious of that. But these men were strong, and we could take out Frederiksen's men on our own. We didn't need Falconer, or Richardson, or MacDane. While they sat in their comfy chairs, discussing the situation, drinking coffee and fine wines, we would be out here, destroying the evil that was Frederiksen's army.
 
It was a new dawn.

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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
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Posted 2011/01/16 - 0:39 GMT
Nice!
I think that there should be a whole new link in the toolbar (whatever you call it... with "Home", "Releases", etc.) that has only these stories in it!
 
-Christian4Mac
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
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Posted 2011/01/17 - 0:05 GMT
Thank you! That is one of the nicest comments I've seen!
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
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Posted 2011/01/18 - 21:55 GMT
...or is it one of the only comments you've seen.... :P
Speaking of which does anyone else read these? cuz they should.
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
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Posted 2011/01/19 - 18:02 GMT
Over 8000 views for all my stories says something, eh?
 
And believe me, I've had over 100 comments in total.
 
:P
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
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Posted 2011/01/20 - 3:13 GMT
Oh you wrote stories on the Marsxplr website too... :P I knew that.
Alright enough talking...... I WANT THE NEXT STORY!!!!!!!!!! (I'm not impatient, why would you think that?)
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
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Posted 2011/01/20 - 7:32 GMT
http://chronicles.plexpedia.com for the next 4 stories.
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
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Posted 2011/01/21 - 13:41 GMT
the chapters keep getting xedingly better as they go on. continue writing i think these stories rock!!!!!!!

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